Personal Poem
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Personal Poem
Don't lock yourself in the past,
Learn from your mistake and release from it,
As a brighter tomorrow awaits.
Time is but an illusion.
It takes some knowledge to don't understand something.
The world reject noone,
only people who reject the world.
Not doing your best in a fight is an insult to your opponent.
Perfect Moves Often Seems Imperfect At First Sight.
Learn from your mistake and release from it,
As a brighter tomorrow awaits.
Time is but an illusion.
It takes some knowledge to don't understand something.
The world reject noone,
only people who reject the world.
Not doing your best in a fight is an insult to your opponent.
Perfect Moves Often Seems Imperfect At First Sight.
Last edited by Yeuyo on Fri Dec 03, 2010 10:34 pm; edited 2 times in total
Re: Personal Poem
It's not good enough to give u a praise....
JDay- Corporal
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Re: Personal Poem
The writing is meh.
But the meaning and the what it symbolizes is pretty deep.
If you tidy it up abit, it'll be a masterpiece.
So overall, great poem I guess.
But the meaning and the what it symbolizes is pretty deep.
If you tidy it up abit, it'll be a masterpiece.
So overall, great poem I guess.
banehaven- Lance Corporal
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Re: Personal Poem
Not really, but it describes what I had to say better than most words.
So yeah.
So yeah.
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Re: Personal Poem
In a judge panel, there are made up of judges with different characteristic, and i'm the bad ones. >=)
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