[Not Just a Comic] Theres something about *SUBJECT NAME HERE*
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Re: [Not Just a Comic] Theres something about *SUBJECT NAME HERE*
I rather stay at the current room. D=
Re: [Not Just a Comic] Theres something about *SUBJECT NAME HERE*
let's move to mercy hospital!
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Re: [Not Just a Comic] Theres something about *SUBJECT NAME HERE*
Great scott, finally the weekend is coming up. I'll upload the next part tomorrow.
This series is starting to take longer and longer. So for now I'll upload weekly, until there are more people other than Yeuyo and JDay commenting.
So more people = faster uploads.
This series is starting to take longer and longer. So for now I'll upload weekly, until there are more people other than Yeuyo and JDay commenting.
So more people = faster uploads.
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D= No... upload it, make a first trial..
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My god that took a long time to do.
And a longer time to make this post.
So heres the next part.
And a complication arises when I tried to do something. But to avoid spoilers, I'll put it at the end of the Part.
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And a longer time to make this post.
So heres the next part.
And a complication arises when I tried to do something. But to avoid spoilers, I'll put it at the end of the Part.
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- Yeuyo wrote:I rather stay at the current room. D=JDay wrote:let's move to mercy hospital!
Actually, you pretty much rather stay here than any of those places.
"Activate it."
"Why should I?"
"...Or Else."
The feminine computerized voice convinced you.
You hurriedly type in 'Mercy Hospital' before the feminine computerized voice decide to do something to convince you further.
You close your eyes and pressed the button.
*zzzt*
The strange device started to emit some rather funky looking effects.
*zhoom*
A strange light is released and rested on the wall opposite to you.
The wall is now starting to blur.
*zhoom*
Another strange light is released, but this one is more direct and landed straight between the 2 odd poles.
All at once, everything stopped. Leaving only a liquid-like substance on the wall.
You slowly walk up to it, somehow thinking the Portal should look different. You can barely make out something on the other end of this Portal.
You gingerly touched the Portal and moved your hand into it. It felt really cold yet dry.
You braced yourself and pushed in with your eyes closed...
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"Test subject will now be sent to destination."
"..."
"Well, that can't be good."
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My Mercy Hospital somehow became corrupted, so I had to improvise and change at the last minute.
Sorry for the inconvenience, but you would have to choose another destination.
So for now, I accept any type of location. Like ocean, desert, mountains, pirate bay, random island, volcano, space, Liberty City, Capital Wasteland, *breathes* underwater, or swamp area.
The challenges will vary depend on the area and location.
So where will JDay go?
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I like the pity face in panel 3~4.. HAHAHAHHAA! let's move on to space, maybe a space center there. It's getting interesting..
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Got this part done, if theres fast enough replies by tomorrow afternoon. I may do the next part when I come back from school.
Anyways, enjoy.
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Anyways, enjoy.
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- Spoiler:
- JDay wrote:let's move on to space
You step through the Portal into Mercy Hospi- wait. This doesn't look like Mercy Hospital.
As you step out of the Portal into what looks like an asteroid in Space, the Portal closes behind you and disintegrates into nothing.
You look nervously around into the deep abyss, thinking that the colour of space seems different than what you see at home.
Wait! Isn't Space just a vacuum and theres no oxygen?!
Oh dear...
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This does not look good at all...
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Now whats that?!
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-Who rescued JDay? Friend, Foe, or Neutral?
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Neutral...but foe sounds intresting.
Let's see, either one, but they decided they gonna experiment with JDay to check how the 'human' on earth are. =P
Let's see, either one, but they decided they gonna experiment with JDay to check how the 'human' on earth are. =P
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No! D=
there were aliens?
there were aliens?
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The second time I read that comic.
'What?
Beat him up before his body desintegrates.'
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'What?
Beat him up before his body desintegrates.'
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Neutral sounds interesting I guess, more for me to work with.
Very well, expect the next part later(or tomorrow).
Very well, expect the next part later(or tomorrow).
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Expect it longer, cause I'm building the whole ship from scratch.
And yes it will be to size.
And it'll be humongous.
Edit: Okay, I'm missing the Elevator floor for the sleeping area.
And yes it will be to size.
And it'll be humongous.
Edit: Okay, I'm missing the Elevator floor for the sleeping area.
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hope to see it tomorrow. Hooyah!
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Sorry about the delay guys.
I got sick these few days and Garrys Mod just decided to be a jerk with me.
But I managed to get the ship done, and its AWESOME.
...if I may say so myself.
And, for the first time.
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Listen to it as you read this part of the story.
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I got sick these few days and Garrys Mod just decided to be a jerk with me.
But I managed to get the ship done, and its AWESOME.
...if I may say so myself.
And, for the first time.
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Listen to it as you read this part of the story.
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[JDay...]
[Wake up.]
[...]
You sit up, woken by a somewhat familiar voice.
You appear to be in some sort of shuttle.
Just then a screen crackles across the screen and a face is shown.
The face behind the screen only asks one question.
So; Who are you?
What will you Answer?
(Btw, that tiny ship is not the one I built, this shuttle is just laughable compared to what I had done.)
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"I just got teleported here wrongly by some what nasty voice back there, I don't even know who I am!"
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JDay wrote:"I just got teleported here wrongly by some what nasty voice back there, I don't even know who I am!"
It seems as though he doesn't believe you.
What do you answer now?
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"I don't even know who the hell are you.. What enemy? Should an 'enemy' worker be standing suitless in the space?"
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Saaay, wheres Yeuyo. It seems like only JDay is here now. =(
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- JDay wrote:"I don't even know who the hell are you.. What enemy? Should an 'enemy' worker be standing suitless in the space?"
What, seriously now?
Get on board wha- Wow.
Now that, is a Ship.
The Shuttle flies inside the Ship via a flap that opened on the side.
You step out cautiously into what seems to be the Hangar.
You are greeted by the man who had talked to you.
It appears that he is the Captain of this Ship.
Questions, eh?
What do you want to Ask?
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"Yea.. Like what company are you working for? What should I do in your ship? Why are you wearing that funny mask? Where do I stay for the night? What food will be serving here? " Yeuyo be a bad guy! wuahahaha..
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Do note that I had just completed building the ship, so the inside is really bare. I will be furnishing the whole ship as I go along this Chapter of the story, hence the suddenly furbished mid deck.
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That doesn't sound too good...
"I'll answer one more question, before we get you suit-up and ready for the Loyalty Test."
So what will you Ask?
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"The Shuttle had done a full body scan on you when it beamed you up and it appears that you have a Barcode on your shoulder. Our scientists here managed to decipher it as 'SUBJECT JDay'"Yeuyo wrote:How did he know my name? D=
"We are working for the Space Unites, a company of officials that keep the law and order in these parts of the Galaxy."JDay wrote:Yea.. Like what company are you working for?
"You will have to earn your keep in this Ship, you will have to undergo missions that will require your expertise, which we will find out afterwards. If we find that you have no special capabilities whatsoever, you will be the Janitor."JDay wrote:What should I do in your ship?
That doesn't sound too good...
"It is part of the Captain's Combatant Suit, it provides air filtration that can filter the most poisonous of gases into harmless oxygen. Other than that, it is designed to be the latest in fashion. You can purchase a replica for only 5 Skreets at the gift shop."JDay wrote:Why are you wearing that funny mask?
"Full of questions are you? You will be staying at the Male Living Quarters, its down the Mid Deck and the first left down."JDay wrote:Where do I stay for the night?
"Most S.U.Ms will serve Military-standard rations to their crew. But here at The Wyvern, we cater to even the most picky of eaters, courtesy of yours truly. So I guarantee that you'll find something to your liking."JDay wrote:What food will be serving here?
""JDay wrote:
"I'll answer one more question, before we get you suit-up and ready for the Loyalty Test."
So what will you Ask?
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"Do i get killed around here?"
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Who's this enemy you talking about?
Is there any war around here?
Like OGame perhaps?
Do you know there's a new server for OGame coming out this coming thursday?
Is there any war around here?
Like OGame perhaps?
Do you know there's a new server for OGame coming out this coming thursday?
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